A very fine poem, Bill. Would the rich full word 'cockatoos' change the
rhythm too much? I prefer it.
Andrew
On 11 January 2017 at 07:45, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> The cracked cackle of cockies
> clamouring down Doctor's Gully
>
> multiple rusty gates opening unwillingly,
> so urgent, so insistent, so brazen
>
> heralding first and last light
>
> bw
>
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Andrew
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