I was just joking cheers P tallyho !
On 08/09/2016 00:06, Bill Wootton wrote:
> Doug, that was Pat, suggesting Bad chasing Bad. Mine was a simple
> inversion, Bad hounding Good, with implications I hoped, of corruption,
> powerlessness, bewilderment.
>
> Bill
>
> On Thursday, 8 September 2016, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
>> Short & sharp, which I like, Bill. Not sure how bad chasing bad would use
>> sirens, though…
>>
>> & the final line’s descent into casual speech stands out..
>>
>> Doug
>>> On Sep 6, 2016, at 5:12 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]
>> <javascript:;>> wrote:
>>> Siren strips away sleep
>>> Must be Good chasing Bad
>>> In the night
>>>
>>> But what if Bad is hounding Good
>>> How would I or anyone
>>> Lying doona-warm in darkness
>>>
>>> Know
>>>
>>> bw
>> Douglas Barbour
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>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>
>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations
>> 2 (UofAPress).
>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>
>> Four or five couplets trying to dance
>> into Persia. Who dances in Persia now?
>>
>> A magic carpet, a prayer mat, red.
>> A knocked off head of somebody on her broken knees.
>>
>> Phyllis Webb
>>
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