I know, Pat, but it is a fearsome concept: Raynes Park breaking doubly bad.
Bill
On Thursday, 8 September 2016, Patrick McManus <
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> I was just joking cheers P tallyho !
>
>
> On 08/09/2016 00:06, Bill Wootton wrote:
>
>> Doug, that was Pat, suggesting Bad chasing Bad. Mine was a simple
>> inversion, Bad hounding Good, with implications I hoped, of corruption,
>> powerlessness, bewilderment.
>>
>> Bill
>>
>> On Thursday, 8 September 2016, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
>> wrote:
>>
>> Short & sharp, which I like, Bill. Not sure how bad chasing bad would use
>>> sirens, though…
>>>
>>> & the final line’s descent into casual speech stands out..
>>>
>>> Doug
>>>
>>>> On Sep 6, 2016, at 5:12 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]
>>>>
>>> <javascript:;>> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Siren strips away sleep
>>>> Must be Good chasing Bad
>>>> In the night
>>>>
>>>> But what if Bad is hounding Good
>>>> How would I or anyone
>>>> Lying doona-warm in darkness
>>>>
>>>> Know
>>>>
>>>> bw
>>>>
>>> Douglas Barbour
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>>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>>
>>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations
>>> 2 (UofAPress).
>>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>>
>>> Four or five couplets trying to dance
>>> into Persia. Who dances in Persia now?
>>>
>>> A magic carpet, a prayer mat, red.
>>> A knocked off head of somebody on her broken knees.
>>>
>>> Phyllis Webb
>>>
>>>
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