Thanks all
the first stanza sort of appeared & then I wanted to repeat the form…
Doug
> On Sep 21, 2016, at 8:48 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> Hear, hear, Doug.
>
> Bill, an autumn man form way back
>
> On Thursday, 22 September 2016, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
>> Too simple, with that typo:
>>
>>
>> each year
>> the year
>> falls closer
>> to the end
>>
>> leaves change
>> colour
>> beauty holds
>> the mind still
>>
>> if all
>> must pass
>> let it be
>> in autumn
>>
>>
>>> On Sep 21, 201
>>> 6, at 10:25 AM, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]
>> <javascript:;>> wrote:
>>>
>>> thanks Doug enjoyed the power of simple words
>>>
>>> P
>>>
>>>
>>> On 21/09/2016 16:49, Douglas Barbour wrote:
>>>> each year
>>>> the year
>>>> falls closer
>>>> to the end
>>>>
>>>> leave change
>>>> colour
>>>> beauty holds
>>>> the mind still
>>>>
>>>> if all
>>>> must pass
>>>> let it be
>>>> in autumn
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Douglas Barbour
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>>>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>>>
>>>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
>> Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
>>>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>>>
>>>> Four or five couplets trying to dance
>>>> into Persia. Who dances in Persia now?
>>>>
>>>> A magic carpet, a prayer mat, red.
>>>> A knocked off head of somebody on her broken knees.
>>>>
>>>> Phyllis Webb
>>
>> Douglas Barbour
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>> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>>
>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations
>> 2 (UofAPress).
>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>
>> Four or five couplets trying to dance
>> into Persia. Who dances in Persia now?
>>
>> A magic carpet, a prayer mat, red.
>> A knocked off head of somebody on her broken knees.
>>
>> Phyllis Webb
>>
Douglas Barbour
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https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuations 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
Four or five couplets trying to dance
into Persia. Who dances in Persia now?
A magic carpet, a prayer mat, red.
A knocked off head of somebody on her broken knees.
Phyllis Webb
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