I see the world weariness, then, Pat. Am I right about the ultramarine?
Small moments of bright joy?
Bill
On Wednesday, 15 June 2016, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> thanks Bill will tinker but I sort of like his world weariness given by
> that line -of course I am also writing her poem being of course the
> opposite !!
> have a good day -must get back to my' Words With Friends' game with two
> Ozz folk and one hereover P
>
> -----Original Message----- From: Bill Wootton
> Sent: Wednesday, June 15, 2016 9:45 AM
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: pat snap
> 743?...................................................................................................................................................
>
> Ultramarine is a surprise here, Pat a colour I associate with tropical sea.
> Or perhaps this is a life leavened by seaside trips? Would you consider
> expunging 'not to his surprise' which might allow the speaker as well as
> readers to arrive at the same time at this discovery?
>
> bill
>
> On Wednesday, 15 June 2016, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]
> >
> wrote:
>
> ORGANISED
>>
>>
>> one morning
>> getting keen
>> getting himself organised
>> he decided to
>> colour code
>> his whole life
>> his existence
>> and discovered not to his surprise
>> that he only required
>> battleship grey
>> and the deepest darkest shades of midnight
>> ultramarine
>> and of course
>> pitch black
>>
>>
>> pmcmanus
>> r986
>>
>> am also playing with in contrast his partner of brightest colours P
>>
>>
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