Persevere!
This is only the first three chapters, Bill.
For me some focus is lost from about line 13 on -
I wanted tree three to be hauled out and relocated.
And if no trees are there any more how can one laugh at you?
Of course the idea is strongly succinctly stated …
Max
On Jun 7, 2016, at 16:04, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> First tree took two years
> to fruit. Fruit was big,
> yellow and bitter as.
>
> Second tree prolific,
> fruit smaller, less bitter
> but a seed demon.
>
> Third tree just right.
> Juicy, refreshing,
> seedfree.
>
> First two trees
> hauled out.
> A season of bliss.
>
> Then the extension
> went up. Total trees
> in backyard orchard
>
> reduced to none.
> Grapefruits to this day
> laugh at me.
>
> bw
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