thanks Bill will tinker but I sort of like his world weariness given by that
line -of course I am also writing her poem being of course the opposite !!
have a good day -must get back to my' Words With Friends' game with two Ozz
folk and one hereover P
-----Original Message-----
From: Bill Wootton
Sent: Wednesday, June 15, 2016 9:45 AM
To: [log in to unmask]
Subject: Re: pat snap
743?...................................................................................................................................................
Ultramarine is a surprise here, Pat a colour I associate with tropical sea.
Or perhaps this is a life leavened by seaside trips? Would you consider
expunging 'not to his surprise' which might allow the speaker as well as
readers to arrive at the same time at this discovery?
bill
On Wednesday, 15 June 2016, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> ORGANISED
>
>
> one morning
> getting keen
> getting himself organised
> he decided to
> colour code
> his whole life
> his existence
> and discovered not to his surprise
> that he only required
> battleship grey
> and the deepest darkest shades of midnight
> ultramarine
> and of course
> pitch black
>
>
> pmcmanus
> r986
>
> am also playing with in contrast his partner of brightest colours P
>
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