Whoops, double commas in previous post by me. I'll be off to punctuation
hell soon.
Could you tighten this, Pat by deleting 'him' from line 2, 'but' from line
4, all of line 7 and the word 'phone' in line ten?
Bill
On Wednesday, 20 April 2016, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> CALL
>
> they phoned
> asking for him
> her husband
> but she said
> unfortunately
> he had died
> passed away
> but she could
> give them his
> mobile phone number in Hell
>
>
> pmcmanus
> r951
>
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