Hi Bill enjoyed this -she did not strike me as having surrendered more a
strong woman ?
I see a mother earth figure am I right -I also like divert
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-----Original Message-----
From: Bill Wootton
Sent: Tuesday, February 2, 2016 11:03 PM
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Subject: She sits skewiff
She sits skewiff,
one leg shooting
out to shore break,
the other splayed
sandwards.
Played-out waves
encircle her,
an island of slump,
around which
beach strollers divert.
They can see
she's there for
the duration.
Her firstborn splashes
in nearby shallows.
Loose top semi-soaked,
arms trawling wet
sand runnels, facing
sun full-on, she
radiates surrender.
bw
Just wondering, is 'around which' a shocker?
Could be:
Played-out waves
encircle her,
an island
of slump.
Beach strollers divert.
Thoughts?
Bill
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