Thank you so much, Doug! Means a lot.
On Tue, Dec 1, 2015 at 2:11 PM, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> Beautiful, Sheila.
>
> I like especially that second verse, its continual moves…
>
> & the air-iness throughout…
>
> Doug
> > On Dec 1, 2015, at 10:55 AM, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
> >
> > Hot Breath of the Firelight
> >
> > If not forced
> > to move,
> > the swivel
> > will elapse
> >
> > Saplings depict
> > branch-at-a-time
> > viewing of a sense
> > of reach
> >
> > As castanets clobber
> > arbitrary air
> > and homophones
> > are grabbed mid-air
> >
> > Serene new flair
> > infiltrates the humidity
> > fares poorly 'til
> > deliverance resumes each year
> >
> > Sheila E. Murphy
>
> Douglas Barbour
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> https://eclecticruckus.wordpress.com/
>
> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2
> (UofAPress).
> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>
> Done in by creation itself.
>
> I mean the gods. Not us. Well us too.
> The gods moved into books. Who wrote the books?
> We wrote the books. In whose dream, then are we dreaming?
>
> Robert Kroetsch.
>
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