Ah, I see, Doug. Well, 'shooting' didn't seem to convey the requisite blast
of light. I'm prepared to consider alternatives.
Bill
On Friday, October 16, 2015, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> No, I meant to say first LINE. This machine corrects too quickly & I don’t
> notice.
>
> I simply found the word ‘firing’ a bit jarring, Bill.
>
> Doug
> > On Oct 15, 2015, at 3:53 AM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]
> <javascript:;>> wrote:
> >
> > Thanks Pat, Kasper, Doug I think. Or maybe Doug is on Patrick's poem.
> >
> > Realised, articles or not, that no reflections did I see. All direct
> > sunlight so I will change reflections to lightshafts.
> >
> > Bill
> >
> > On Thursday, October 15, 2015, Kasper Salonen <[log in to unmask]
> <javascript:;>> wrote:
> >
> >> Very pretty indeed!! Lack of articles is jarrish though.
> >>
> >> KS
> >>
> >> ---
> >> *Kasper Salonen* (B.A./HuK)
> >> Freelance Translation/Journalism
> >> Poet/Producer, Helsinki Poetry Connection
> >> http://hkipoetryconnection.blogspot.com/
> >> https://soundcloud.com/kasper_salonen
> >> +358505554947
> >>
> >> On 15 October 2015 at 01:11, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]
> <javascript:;>
> >> <javascript:;>> wrote:
> >>
> >>> Well, I trie to reply to this, in order to say that I liked it but
> found
> >>> that first one a bit too much
> >>>
> >>> but this is what I got back, three times, from Jiscmail:
> >>>
> >>> Your posting to the POETRYETC list has been rejected because it only
> >>> contains
> >>> material in a format disallowed by the list configuration. The
> >>> list is
> >>> configured to remove unwanted material and process the remaining text.
> >>> However,
> >>> in this case, there would be nothing left after removing the
> >>> disallowed
> >>> material. You may want to resend your message in plain text, which
> is
> >>> always
> >>> allowed.
> >>>
> >>> Not sure what’s going on, orin this will get through…
> >>>
> >>> Doug
> >>>> On Oct 13, 2015, at 3:23 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]
> <javascript:;>
> >> <javascript:;>>
> >>> wrote:
> >>>>
> >>>> Directly firing
> >>>> albeit aslant through
> >>>> wide window
> >>>> near bedside table
> >>>>
> >>>> high reflections
> >>>> open eyes
> >>>> venetians regulate
> >>>> every saturated
> >>>> ray of
> >>>> sun.
> >>>>
> >>>> bw
> >>>
> >>
>
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