No, I meant to say first LINE. This machine corrects too quickly & I don’t notice.
I simply found the word ‘firing’ a bit jarring, Bill.
Doug
> On Oct 15, 2015, at 3:53 AM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> Thanks Pat, Kasper, Doug I think. Or maybe Doug is on Patrick's poem.
>
> Realised, articles or not, that no reflections did I see. All direct
> sunlight so I will change reflections to lightshafts.
>
> Bill
>
> On Thursday, October 15, 2015, Kasper Salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
>> Very pretty indeed!! Lack of articles is jarrish though.
>>
>> KS
>>
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>> On 15 October 2015 at 01:11, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]
>> <javascript:;>> wrote:
>>
>>> Well, I trie to reply to this, in order to say that I liked it but found
>>> that first one a bit too much
>>>
>>> but this is what I got back, three times, from Jiscmail:
>>>
>>> Your posting to the POETRYETC list has been rejected because it only
>>> contains
>>> material in a format disallowed by the list configuration. The
>>> list is
>>> configured to remove unwanted material and process the remaining text.
>>> However,
>>> in this case, there would be nothing left after removing the
>>> disallowed
>>> material. You may want to resend your message in plain text, which is
>>> always
>>> allowed.
>>>
>>> Not sure what’s going on, orin this will get through…
>>>
>>> Doug
>>>> On Oct 13, 2015, at 3:23 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]
>> <javascript:;>>
>>> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Directly firing
>>>> albeit aslant through
>>>> wide window
>>>> near bedside table
>>>>
>>>> high reflections
>>>> open eyes
>>>> venetians regulate
>>>> every saturated
>>>> ray of
>>>> sun.
>>>>
>>>> bw
>>>
>>
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