Thanks Pat, Kasper, Doug I think. Or maybe Doug is on Patrick's poem.
Realised, articles or not, that no reflections did I see. All direct
sunlight so I will change reflections to lightshafts.
Bill
On Thursday, October 15, 2015, Kasper Salonen <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Very pretty indeed!! Lack of articles is jarrish though.
>
> KS
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> On 15 October 2015 at 01:11, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]
> <javascript:;>> wrote:
>
> > Well, I trie to reply to this, in order to say that I liked it but found
> > that first one a bit too much
> >
> > but this is what I got back, three times, from Jiscmail:
> >
> > Your posting to the POETRYETC list has been rejected because it only
> > contains
> > material in a format disallowed by the list configuration. The
> > list is
> > configured to remove unwanted material and process the remaining text.
> > However,
> > in this case, there would be nothing left after removing the
> > disallowed
> > material. You may want to resend your message in plain text, which is
> > always
> > allowed.
> >
> > Not sure what’s going on, orin this will get through…
> >
> > Doug
> > > On Oct 13, 2015, at 3:23 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]
> <javascript:;>>
> > wrote:
> > >
> > > Directly firing
> > > albeit aslant through
> > > wide window
> > > near bedside table
> > >
> > > high reflections
> > > open eyes
> > > venetians regulate
> > > every saturated
> > > ray of
> > > sun.
> > >
> > > bw
> >
>
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