Good stuff, Andrew. I like 'drank at the canon' and the concluding
reverential couplet.
Bill
On Wednesday, September 16, 2015, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> I’m not joshing you,
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> I like the kid’s first book.
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> Sure it has *young *written
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> all over it, and there are
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> huge failures there, but
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> The daring! The rhythms!
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> The searching! The knocking
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> down of old rusty fences!
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> The boy was drunk on words
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> before he drank at the canon.
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> A critic now says, *The poems*
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> *were all right for their time. *
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> As pink shoelaces were
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> for desert boots back then
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> and Pat Boone singing
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> *Friendly Persuasion.*
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> Many a sentence has
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> a first draft. I dip my pen
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> in his ink
> every time I write.
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> - Andrew
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