Funny, I've just come in from chatting to a friend about a third -- now
dead - and ourselves; and all that might add up to us all living in the
invisible in some ways... Intriguing! & I am happy to have intrigued
Thanks
L
On 16 September 2015 at 15:45, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Open, & the spaces as time, as listing a kind of length of time passing,
> it feels like.
>
> that’s the ‘a while’ at work throughout the rest as I feel it, Lawrence. a
> vagueness in the long term relation…suggested. Suggested, to me, because
> finally the person(s) seem to live in the invisible, or the hidden (as
> emotion?)..
>
> in other words, this keeps intriguing…
>
> Doug
> On Sep 15, 2015, at 10:53 PM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
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> > looking at a lover
> >
> > carefully a while
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> >
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> > her lips drooling
> >
> >
> >
> > there was a vagueness
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> >
> >
> > anything'd be scared
> >
> > or scarred
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> >
> >
> > small shoulders
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> > wanting to speak emphatically
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> > face as if stained bloodily
> >
> > breaking out
> >
> > through some curtaining
> >
> > near invisibility
>
> Douglas Barbour
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>
> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2
> (UofAPress).
> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>
> Done in by creation itself.
>
> I mean the gods. Not us. Well us too.
> The gods moved into books. Who wrote the books?
> We wrote the books. In whose dream, then are we dreaming?
>
> Robert Kroetsch.
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