On Sep 9, 2015, at 15:58, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Nice, Max. I wonder that you allowed 'though' to slip in (line 9).
>
> Bill
Bill, thanks,
but I’m embarrassed to think I have 'slipped in' some faulty expression.
Is it that it’s too colloquial to sit easily with the rest?
Max
>
>> On 10 Sep 2015, at 12:21 am, Max Richards <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>
>> Chestnuts
>>
>> Up in the park
>> you can recover
>> from the climb:
>>
>> perch on a bench,
>> drawing breath
>> beneath old trees,
>>
>> shielded from quick
>> time by their slowness.
>> Eye-catching, though,
>>
>> are darting squirrels
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