Your eyes, Doug. 'roiling', not 'rolling', but I take your point.
Bill
On Saturday, September 12, 2015, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> Not sure either adjective is necessary, Bill, so also not sure ‘rolling’
> better than ‘mass’…
>
> Otherwise, looks fine in my reception…
>
> Doug
> On Sep 11, 2015, at 7:18 AM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]
> <javascript:;>> wrote:
>
> > Just testing, poetcers with new email springboard and one word change
> > below. Please advise how lines line up.
> >
> > Dawn hovers,
> > faint light brightening.
> > Morning horizon
> > rupture.
> > Lying on its side,
> > a giant wine glass
> > outlined in vapour strip
> > jags expected evenness.
> > Sleepy eyes flicker.
> > Clouds bleed apart
> > so slowly
> > spilling
> > into roiling white
> >
> > Kinky Bill (thanks, Pat; better than Cloudy Bill)
>
> Douglas Barbour
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> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2
> (UofAPress).
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> Done in by creation itself.
>
> I mean the gods. Not us. Well us too.
> The gods moved into books. Who wrote the books?
> We wrote the books. In whose dream, then are we dreaming?
>
> Robert Kroetsch.
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