I liked 'Brownlow to Fyfe'. I was with you all the way :-) But the last two
lines don't rhyme? Intentional?
On 30 September 2015 at 13:51, Max Richards <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Mmm, Bill.
>
> Not sure about last two lines…
>
> (Is your rediscovery one of journals written between the ages of 9 and 23?)
>
> Guessing that Brownlow and Fyfe are place names.
>
> Max
>
>
> On Sep 29, 2015, at 20:20, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> > Bits of me,
> > Journals 9-23
> >
> > Unpacking my life.
> > Brownlow to Fyfe.
> >
> > News leaks in.
> > Now far from kin.
> >
> > What I used to be,
> > is that still me?
> >
> > Here a scrawled page,
> > a previous age,
> >
> > concerns about work,
> > plans, moods, eerch!
> >
> > Much more to unpack.
> > Stop submitting to slack.
> >
> > But how unnerving it feels
> > to start new history.
> >
> > bw
>
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