Yes, intriguing ... That's the right word, Sheila. I'll go back to it
later!!!
Andrew
On 16 September 2015 at 15:59, Patrick McManus <
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> L thanks P
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> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
> Sent: 16 September 2015 05:53
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> Subject: Charcoal sketch
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> looking at a lover
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> carefully a while
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> her lips drooling
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> there was a vagueness
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> anything'd be scared
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> or scarred
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> small shoulders
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> wanting to speak emphatically
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> face as if stained bloodily
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> breaking out
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> through some curtaining
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> near invisibility
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