I really like the first stanza, as image, Bill. Wonder if the first lines of the 2nd could go first? Or be allowed to be implication?
Doug
On Sep 8, 2015, at 4:12 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Kink
>
> Dawn hovers,
> faint light brightening.
> Cloud horizon
> rupture.
> Lying on its side,
> a giant wine glass
> outlined in cloud strip
> jags expected
> evenness.
>
> Framed by bedroom
> window, equal sky
> portions sit within and
> without the vast vessel.
> Sleepy eyes flicker.
> Clouds bleed apart
> almost imperceptibly,
> spilling
> into mass whiteness.
>
> bw
> 9.9.15
Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
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I mean the gods. Not us. Well us too.
The gods moved into books. Who wrote the books?
We wrote the books. In whose dream, then are we dreaming?
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