Sorry, yes, my eyes, or my fingers…
I still wonder…
Doug
On Sep 11, 2015, at 5:50 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Your eyes, Doug. 'roiling', not 'rolling', but I take your point.
>
> Bill
>
> On Saturday, September 12, 2015, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
>> Not sure either adjective is necessary, Bill, so also not sure ‘rolling’
>> better than ‘mass’…
>>
>> Otherwise, looks fine in my reception…
>>
>> Doug
>> On Sep 11, 2015, at 7:18 AM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]
>> <javascript:;>> wrote:
>>
>>> Just testing, poetcers with new email springboard and one word change
>>> below. Please advise how lines line up.
>>>
>>> Dawn hovers,
>>> faint light brightening.
>>> Morning horizon
>>> rupture.
>>> Lying on its side,
>>> a giant wine glass
>>> outlined in vapour strip
>>> jags expected evenness.
>>> Sleepy eyes flicker.
>>> Clouds bleed apart
>>> so slowly
>>> spilling
>>> into roiling white
>>>
>>> Kinky Bill (thanks, Pat; better than Cloudy Bill)
>>
>> Douglas Barbour
>> [log in to unmask] <javascript:;>
>>
>> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2
>> (UofAPress).
>> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>>
>> Done in by creation itself.
>>
>> I mean the gods. Not us. Well us too.
>> The gods moved into books. Who wrote the books?
>> We wrote the books. In whose dream, then are we dreaming?
>>
>> Robert Kroetsch.
>>
Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
Done in by creation itself.
I mean the gods. Not us. Well us too.
The gods moved into books. Who wrote the books?
We wrote the books. In whose dream, then are we dreaming?
Robert Kroetsch.
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