Thanks, Sheila
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On 16 September 2015 at 06:09, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> Lawrence,
>
> This piece moves its reader away from the changed person. The charcoal,
> charred change is haunting. The expression is held in abeyance.
> The one looking sees something in the self, and possibly the change is
> there.
>
> Change is everywhere.
>
> Very intriguing.
>
> Sheila
>
> On Tue, Sep 15, 2015 at 9:53 PM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
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> > looking at a lover
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> > carefully a while
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> > her lips drooling
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> > there was a vagueness
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> > anything'd be scared
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> > or scarred
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> > small shoulders
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> > wanting to speak emphatically
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> > face as if stained bloodily
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> > breaking out
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> > through some curtaining
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> > near invisibility
> >
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