Many thanks, Sheila.
These mundane places are full of hauntings.
Best,
Jill
On 14/08/2015, at 1:49 AM, Sheila Murphy wrote:
> I'm with Doug on that comment, Jill. I found the passage hauntingly
> beautiful. As the poem itself. Thanks, Sheila
>
> On Thu, Aug 13, 2015 at 6:02 AM, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
>> Hi Doug,
>>
>> Thanks.
>>
>> I think it's particularly about offices built in a certain era, the grey
>> era, let's say.
>>
>> Sometimes I scare myself.
>>
>> Cheers,
>> Jill
>>
>>
>> On 13/08/2015, at 12:33 AM, Douglas Barbour wrote:
>>
>>> Ah, could be many (any) offices, Jill, & so I felt a general malaise
>> there.
>>>
>>> Loved the line break here:
>>>
>>> You didn’t know what you now need
>>>
>>> to know,
>>>
>>> And that penultimate stanza…
>>>
>>> Doug
>>> On Aug 12, 2015, at 1:48 AM, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>>>
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