Yes, agree, the swing - all the way to the tipping of the hat and
the last three lines.
Jill
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Jill Jones www.jilljones.com.au
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Subject:Re: Snap: Top o' the Trinity
Yes, it swings away. Love it!
Andrew
On 6 August 2015 at 07:53, Douglas Barbour wrote:
> You & Bob D, Sheila.
>
> gift or gilt, the dome doesn’t deserve it.
>
> and who gets that time off anyway
>
> I think it s(w)ings…
>
> Doug
>
> On Aug 5, 2015, at 2:15 PM, Sheila Murphy wrote:
>
> > Having aged
> > well into
> > youth,
> >
> > and photo-
> > shopping a pervasive
> > gilt upon the dome,
> >
> > the father tips a hatful
> > of detrital
> > eminence, intoning:
> >
> > "and the rest
> > of the day
> > to yourself!"
> >
> > Sheila E. Murphy
>
> Douglas Barbour
> [log in to unmask]
>
> Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations &
Continuation 2
> (UofAPress).
> Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
>
> Done in by creation itself.
>
> I mean the gods. Not us. Well us too.
> The gods moved into books. Who wrote the books?
> We wrote the books. In whose dream, then are we dreaming?
>
> Robert Kroetsch.
>
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