:-)
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Sent: 22 July 2015 10:45
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Good on you, Octo-Pat. Or maybe you should patent that mirror!
Cheers,
Bill
On 22/07/2015, at 6:35 PM, Patrick McManus wrote:
> LOOK
>
> that cold
> bleak morning
> facing soon
> becoming an
> octogenarian
> he took
> a long hard
> critical look
> at himself
> in the cruel
> unforgiving
> fly specked
> cracked mirror
> with it's harsh
> bright neon
> overhead light
> and was forced
> reluctantly
> to admit
> how really
> absolutely
> terrific he
> looked
>
>
> pmcmanus
> r814
> I rather enjoyed using the clichés here -do they work?
> then giving unexpected finish :-)
>
>
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