Done, Doug. Releases it is. Thanks.
Actually, testing the mechanism out today, I discovered I have it wrong. The Juice sound occurs when the cupboard closes, maybe because one pinion grips slightly before the other? But I think I'll leave the poem as is. It sounds more refreshing to have the sound happen on opening.
Bill
> On 19 Jul 2015, at 1:03 am, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> I agree, but with the small caveat that perhaps it could be
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> 'as the metal clip releases’ ?
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> Doug
>> On Jul 15, 2015, at 10:58 AM, Max Richards <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> This feels like one of WCWilliams’s wee perceptions,
>> the texture of sound,
>> the visuals,
>> the sequence.
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>> Thanks, Bill.
>>
>>> On Jul 14, 2015, at 15:01, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>>> Juice,
>>> it sounds like,
>>> the cupboard door opening
>>> on my yellow maple dresser
>>> as the metal clip is released
>>> from the two pinion points
>>> which spring
>>> apart
>>> with a joyous squeak.
>>>
>>> bw
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