I'd love some feedback on the following, if you have time.
.....
Life is a hit album,
concept pending.
As spring dusts off
the holding yards,
North stays steady in a storm.
We plan
but rarely complete.
It’s a game of millimetres,
of a bee’s tit. Where
you came from
takes you to where
you go: *turn *
*to us with confidence.*
- Andrew Burke
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