Geez, sorry but I don’t know.Ive seen it with others, Tina, so you’re not alone.
I like what I figured out (through breaking where the words conjoined), that garden imagined…
Doug
On Jun 17, 2015, at 2:16 AM, Tina Bass <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Does anyone have any ideas why I can send my poem to myself and it looks ok but when I send it to poetryetc I am losing most of the line breaks, para breaks and generally spacing?
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>> Date: Wed, 17 Jun 2015 08:14:40 +0000
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>> Subject: snap again - hopefully with line breaks
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Douglas Barbour
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Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation 2 (UofAPress).
Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
There is no life that does not rise
melodic from scales of the marvelous.
To which our grief refers.
Robert Duncan.
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