Hi Andrew I read the second version first-I got confused that blind dog was
just background -the first version I understood !!cheers P (easily confused
:-))
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Subject: snap: haiku change
measuring the step
with her chin -
blind dog
Andrew
http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
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