>What's glaring, the violin case or the washing machine?
washing machine. misplaced comma after "machine" - thanks for that
safe landing to you
thanks for spotting the ambiguity
L
On 15 April 2015 at 13:59, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Why 'but' in line 3, L? What's glaring, the violin case or the washing
> machine? Sorry, picture here too indistinct for me, despite fresh images.
> Plank guys? Mafia film perhaps? I'm up in the air on this.
>
> Ab
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> > On 15 Apr 2015, at 8:53 pm, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
> >
> > a wooden table under a shady tree;
> >
> > a leg of lamb on a blue plastic armchair
> >
> > beside the table but in sun; two blokes
> >
> > tied to planks on the other side of the street,
> >
> > also in the sun, to teach them to sing out;
> >
> > an empty violin case, laid upon
> >
> > a white washing machine, made almost
> >
> > invisible by its own glare; a car
> >
> > beneath two adjacent trees, reaching
> >
> > from trunk to trunk; a smoking barbecue;
> >
> > a cream waste bin; a bonfire not yet lit
> >
>
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