((((h)e (had)a(b(a)d) (ca)se))(of ((br)ack(ett)ing)))):-))))))))))))) (P)
-----Original Message-----
From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of Andrew Burke
Sent: 24 April 2015 09:11
To: [log in to unmask]
Subject: Re: Tire Swing (Wing)
Like, but am also an anti-brackets person :-)
Andrew
On 24 April 2015 at 03:22, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Thanks, Patrick. Good ideas. You join another reader of mine who gets
> after me re: those brackets. I think I might be wise to listen to what you
say.
> Will inspect this little item and take this seriously!
> Thank you!
>
> On Thu, Apr 23, 2015 at 10:01 AM, Patrick McManus <
> [log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> > Enjoyed this last verse seems not fitting??different? or perhaps
> > leave
> out
> > 'stacked' what's with the brackets??cheers old P
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics
> > [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Sheila Murphy
> > Sent: 23 April 2015 07:18
> > To: [log in to unmask]
> > Subject: Tire Swing (Wing)
> >
> > Alongside (stride
> > rest softens
> > to the west
> > things matter
> >
> > openly away
> > (stray fast
> > to hinge upon
> > (and sing away
> >
> > the sting of fast
> > asleep (the tension
> > falters last
> > before awake time
> >
> > gravity comes
> > framed with
> > fracas stacked unevenly
> > against (the odds
> >
> > Sheila E. Murphy
> >
>
--
Andrew
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