Thanks, Andrew, we're starting to find consensus. :)
Sheila
On Fri, Apr 24, 2015 at 1:10 AM, Andrew Burke <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Like, but am also an anti-brackets person :-)
>
> Andrew
>
> On 24 April 2015 at 03:22, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> > Thanks, Patrick. Good ideas. You join another reader of mine who gets
> after
> > me re: those brackets. I think I might be wise to listen to what you say.
> > Will inspect this little item and take this seriously!
> > Thank you!
> >
> > On Thu, Apr 23, 2015 at 10:01 AM, Patrick McManus <
> > [log in to unmask]> wrote:
> >
> > > Enjoyed this last verse seems not fitting??different? or perhaps leave
> > out
> > > 'stacked' what's with the brackets??cheers old P
> > >
> > > -----Original Message-----
> > > From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]]
> On
> > > Behalf Of Sheila Murphy
> > > Sent: 23 April 2015 07:18
> > > To: [log in to unmask]
> > > Subject: Tire Swing (Wing)
> > >
> > > Alongside (stride
> > > rest softens
> > > to the west
> > > things matter
> > >
> > > openly away
> > > (stray fast
> > > to hinge upon
> > > (and sing away
> > >
> > > the sting of fast
> > > asleep (the tension
> > > falters last
> > > before awake time
> > >
> > > gravity comes
> > > framed with
> > > fracas stacked unevenly
> > > against (the odds
> > >
> > > Sheila E. Murphy
> > >
> >
>
>
>
> --
> Andrew
> http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
> 'Undercover of Lightness'
> http://walleahpress.com.au/recent-publications.html
> 'Shikibu Shuffle'
>
> http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com.au/2012/03/new-from-aboveground-press-shikibu.html
>
|