I wonder why. Seems to me to be the right word there; preferable to their;
and there's an irregular repetition of the short i which I find pleasing
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On 18 February 2015 at 15:31, Max Richards <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Oh yes, but I'd reconsider the word 'its'/
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> [definition of reciprocity:
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> you attend my funeral -
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> I'll attend yours.]
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> Max
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> On Feb 18, 2015, at 3:19, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> > Let us, together, do gardening,
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> > each giving their contribution
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> > with no stint; each taking its own
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> > idea of pleasure without pause.
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> > It's cooperation, I want,
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> > with mutuality desired.
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