Thanks, Catherine. Do you mean after 'for ever more', so deleting The Spice Girls stuff or just the final three lines? The Facebook stuff is entirely unconnected, (as far as I know!) I just threw it in because it seemed to offer a potential clue.
Considering dropping the Facebook stuff and rejigging final lines to
Stop.
What might
I start?
Bill
> On 25 Feb 2015, at 8:15 am, Catherine Daly <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> I know I haven't contributed here recently, but I'd drop the last stanza.
> This far, seems cool. keep going!!!!
>
> happy face emoticon,
> Catherine Daly
>
> On Tue, Feb 24, 2015 at 4:07 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
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>> STOP
>>
>> One word message
>> on my phone
>> left at 7.03,
>> unknown phone number,
>> followed by
>> Stop,
>> lower case,
>> at 8.04.
>> Different phone number,
>> also unknown.
>>
>> Feel tempted to enquire,
>> of one, or both,
>> Just what exactly
>> is it you would have
>> me desist from doing.
>> o unknown one(s)?
>>
>> But what if this leads
>> to some sort
>> of unstoppable scam,
>> jamming up my phone
>> for ever more?
>>
>> Later, on Facebook,
>> I note an acquaintance
>> has posted Stop,
>> a song by The Spice Girls.
>> I play it a bit.
>> It's the drivel I expect.
>>
>> Stop.
>> I didn't even know
>> I'd started.
>>
>> bw
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