The last stanza is wrong, needs to be worked out, but there's nut to chew
there -- the last stanza ends it up too quickly, IMHO -- keep on!
On Tue, Feb 24, 2015 at 4:32 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> Thanks, Catherine. Do you mean after 'for ever more', so deleting The
> Spice Girls stuff or just the final three lines? The Facebook stuff is
> entirely unconnected, (as far as I know!) I just threw it in because it
> seemed to offer a potential clue.
>
> Considering dropping the Facebook stuff and rejigging final lines to
>
> Stop.
> What might
> I start?
>
> Bill
>
>
> > On 25 Feb 2015, at 8:15 am, Catherine Daly <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> >
> > I know I haven't contributed here recently, but I'd drop the last stanza.
> > This far, seems cool. keep going!!!!
> >
> > happy face emoticon,
> > Catherine Daly
> >
> > On Tue, Feb 24, 2015 at 4:07 PM, Bill Wootton <[log in to unmask]>
> > wrote:
> >
> >> STOP
> >>
> >> One word message
> >> on my phone
> >> left at 7.03,
> >> unknown phone number,
> >> followed by
> >> Stop,
> >> lower case,
> >> at 8.04.
> >> Different phone number,
> >> also unknown.
> >>
> >> Feel tempted to enquire,
> >> of one, or both,
> >> Just what exactly
> >> is it you would have
> >> me desist from doing.
> >> o unknown one(s)?
> >>
> >> But what if this leads
> >> to some sort
> >> of unstoppable scam,
> >> jamming up my phone
> >> for ever more?
> >>
> >> Later, on Facebook,
> >> I note an acquaintance
> >> has posted Stop,
> >> a song by The Spice Girls.
> >> I play it a bit.
> >> It's the drivel I expect.
> >>
> >> Stop.
> >> I didn't even know
> >> I'd started.
> >>
> >> bw
> >
>
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