A-rated
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On 6 November 2014 11:20, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> Aerated?
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
> Sent: 06 November 2014 11:07
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: breakdown
>
> Ah, sister, we all move towards our ending in the air!
> I don't believe that or anything like; but thought it might be fun to say.
> *
> Thank you so much
>
> L
>
> On 5 November 2014 17:55, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
> > Agree with Sheila. And the way it moves to that ending, in the air.
> > J
> > ________________________Jill Jones www.jilljones.com.au
> >
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Poetryetc: poetry and poetics"
> > To:
> > Cc:
> > Sent:Wed, 5 Nov 2014 10:45:54 -0700
> > Subject:Re: breakdown
> >
> > I hear this vividly, Lawrence. It is highly charged. The visual
> > enters the auditory in a way that resonates.
> >
> > On Wed, Nov 5, 2014 at 3:53 AM, Lawrence Upton
> > wrote:
> >
> > > prewar material; cut to
> > >
> > > camera lens, curling at the edges,
> > >
> > > one tower above many antennae,
> > >
> > > weapon barrels
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > a shallow rise out of straight, slow climbing curves > >
> > returning to straight > > a raised eye brow > > back of my hand >
> > > > > Tall poles set in heath.
> > >
> > > A monkey up a pole gesticulating
> > >
> > > with one upstretched arm.
> > >
> > > It is dressed in a rhinestone suit.
> > >
> > > Sunset in one hour and a half.
> > >
> > > Sleet falling in shining air.
> > >
> >
> >
>
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