Aerated?
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From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of Lawrence Upton
Sent: 06 November 2014 11:07
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Subject: Re: breakdown
Ah, sister, we all move towards our ending in the air!
I don't believe that or anything like; but thought it might be fun to say.
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Thank you so much
L
On 5 November 2014 17:55, Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Agree with Sheila. And the way it moves to that ending, in the air.
> J
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> ----- Original Message -----
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> Sent:Wed, 5 Nov 2014 10:45:54 -0700
> Subject:Re: breakdown
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> I hear this vividly, Lawrence. It is highly charged. The visual
> enters the auditory in a way that resonates.
>
> On Wed, Nov 5, 2014 at 3:53 AM, Lawrence Upton
> wrote:
>
> > prewar material; cut to
> >
> > camera lens, curling at the edges,
> >
> > one tower above many antennae,
> >
> > weapon barrels
> >
> >
> >
> > a shallow rise out of straight, slow climbing curves > >
> returning to straight > > a raised eye brow > > back of my hand >
> > > > Tall poles set in heath.
> >
> > A monkey up a pole gesticulating
> >
> > with one upstretched arm.
> >
> > It is dressed in a rhinestone suit.
> >
> > Sunset in one hour and a half.
> >
> > Sleet falling in shining air.
> >
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