Chuck the 'the' out. No need to be a slave to the count.
Andrew
On 20 November 2014 10:32, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Lovely, Doug. I feel it, even hear the visual.
>
> On Wed, Nov 19, 2014 at 4:26 PM, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
> > early morning sun
> > whiter shading against blue
> > the thin trees glisten
> >
> >
> > Douglas Barbour
> > [log in to unmask]
> >
> > Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation
> 2
> > (UofAPress).
> > Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
> >
> > that we are only
> > as we find out we are
> >
> > Charles Olson
> >
>
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Andrew
http://hispirits.blogspot.com/
'Undercover of Lightness'
http://walleahpress.com.au/recent-publications.html
'Shikibu Shuffle'
http://abovegroundpress.blogspot.com.au/2012/03/new-from-aboveground-press-shikibu.html
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