Good, Pat. Just wondered. Would you consider scrapping lines 3 and 7 and changing 'worry' to 'worried'?
Bill
> On 20 Nov 2014, at 5:45 am, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> Sheila thanks -yes it is a worry with winter approaching
> P
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Sheila Murphy
> Sent: 19 November 2014 16:55
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> Patrick, I do so love this!!!!!
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> Sheila
>
>> On Wed, Nov 19, 2014 at 3:30 AM, Patrick McManus < [log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> COVER
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>> gosh!
>> he thought
>> it was
>> already
>> autumn
>> and
>> he got to
>> worry about
>> his fig leaf
>> falling
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>> pmcmanus
>> r640
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