Thank you, Bill. I will take a look at this!
On Oct 28, 2014 12:33 AM, "Bill Wootton" <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Like the gentle, nostalgic feel, Sheila, esp stanzas 1, 3, 4. Line 5 for
> me, however, confounds. Perhaps it's just a punctuation thing?
>
> Bill
>
>
> > On 28 Oct 2014, at 12:35 pm, Sheila Murphy <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
> >
> > A spindly and
> > transparent winter
> > parts from
> >
> > lake
> > the color snow,
> > foreground
> >
> > of sticks
> > alongside
> > evening's pale
> >
> > sky parted
> > from shared
> > place.
> >
> > Sheila E. Murphy
> >
>
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