parts, parted - that holds it, though I think hold is not exactly
what I mean
being here in the north I see this even more
thanks,
jill
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Jill Jones www.jilljones.com.au
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Subject:pre-snap
A spindly and
transparent winter
parts from
lake
the color snow,
foreground
of sticks
alongside
evening's pale
sky parted
from shared
place.
Sheila E. Murphy
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