'I am' technically better, Pat.
Bill
On 24/09/2014, at 6:48 PM, Patrick McManus wrote:
> Bill and Alls cheers I am not sure about the last line - 'myself' does not
> sound quite right? Could be 'than me' or 'I am' any comments welcome
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
> Behalf Of Bill Wootton
> Sent: 24 September 2014 09:21
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: pattttttttt snapppp 645? )<?><?><?>(
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> Moi aussi, Pat.
>
> Bill
>
> On Wed, Sep 24th, 2014 at 5:17 PM, Patrick McManus
> <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
>> TALK
>>
>> these days
>> when I
>> get to talk
>> talk to
>> gaffers
>> grannies
>> geezers
>> wrinklies
>> and crinklies
>> to old people
>> really old people
>> I often discover
>> that actually
>> they are younger
>> younger than
>> myself
>>
>>
>> pmcmanus
>> r591
>>
>>
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