Hi young Barry -you have a point there -I always have seen the title as separate from the poem a sort of intro -thanks for thoughts -appreciated
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From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On Behalf Of Barry Alpert
Sent: 17 September 2014 15:26
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Subject: Re: patty snappys 644 .#~+'(.#~+'(.#~+'(
Young Patrick,
HELL and Higgs Boson won't wait for the repetition of "all hell" before breaking out. Why not remove the first line?
Ancient Barry
On Wed, 17 Sep 2014 09:25:07 +0100, Patrick McManus <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>ALL HELL
>
>all hell
>broke out
>when he
>discovered a
>Higgs Boson
>in his sands
>of time
>
>
>pmcmanus
>r595
>
>
>
>SELF
>
>he was
>a self
>of his
>former
>shadow
>
>
>pmcmanus
>r599
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