Doug, Like Barry, I saw (or heard) three possible readings, equally valid. 'Slighting' might become my new
favourite word for a bit. And thanks, Max, for pointing out the ryhme scheme, which eluded me at first.
Bill
On Thu, Jul 17th, 2014 at 5:02 AM, Barry Alpert <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
> I was enjoying 3 possible ways of reading your text until this
> visualization just surfaced instead of what initially appeared as 2
> independent units side-by-side. Barry
>
> On Wed, 16 Jul 2014 12:15:39 -0600, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]>
> wrote:
>
> >in the summer sun
> > light the paintings
> > glow as
> >
> >never under un
> > natural lighting
> > slighting the colours
> >
> >so artfully
> > arranged
> >
> >
> >Douglas Barbour
> >[log in to unmask]
> >
> >Recent publications: (With Sheila E Murphy) Continuations & Continuation
> 2 (UofAPress).
> >Recording Dates (Rubicon Press).
> >
> >Something else is out there
> >godamnit
> >
> >And I want to hear it
> >
> > C.D.Wright
>
>
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