I read and liked them, Dom. A slow sequence, indeed, but still hanging
together.
Andrew
On 5 June 2014 00:20, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> I like the shift of phrase, Dominic
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> how deliberate is the other shift I feel from an older discourse to the
> updated slang of the ending?
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> Doug
> On Jun 3, 2014, at 9:57 AM, Dominic Fox <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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> > Fraying but not hating every minute -
> > withdrawal-addled, dissipating nimbus
> > of cotton-wool with spastic clawing - can it
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> > be that these delapidated timbers
> > have weathered enough foulness, and are creaking
> > back now into their soundness-after-rumpus?
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> > I try not to look down. Albeit on waking
> > there is accustomed fellness, it is finite.
> > May make it out. Am fraying but not freaking.
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> > --
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> > There's a short and verrry slowly growing sequence of these -
> > http://sevenpits.tumblr.com.
> >
> > D
> >
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> Douglas Barbour
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> Latest books:
> Continuations & Continuations 2 (with Sheila E Murphy)
> http://www.uap.ualberta.ca/UAP.asp?LID=41&bookID=962
> Recording Dates
> (Rubicon Press)
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> precise about whatever
> it is you are
> saying, I said
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> Bill Manhire
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Andrew
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