I have had trpuble with pigment from white birds -cheers P
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*Five miles from Camborne*
white birds on a brown field
not all over it - up one end -
about two thirds of the way up, going away from me
far more on this side than the other -
I am on the left
no jokes - I am trying to help you see this
something between a narrow triangle and a line
had been started, as I say,
about two thirds of the way up, on the left-hand side,
and directed towards the top right-hand corner -
though I doubt that it is square or even rectangular -
not making it, a brush full of white birds, dropping most of
its pigment on the left-hand side, in the middle of
an imagined left-hand column, and lifted, leaving a tapering triangle line
that's lost in the wet brown of the right hand of the visible field
viscous white specks here and there
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