Viewer support? Lawrence?
It's an interesting in & out viewpoint, with a less than assured guide?
As I 'see' it....
Doug
On May 9, 2014, at 10:33 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> *Five miles from Camborne*
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> white birds on a brown field
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> not all over it - up one end -
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> about two thirds of the way up, going away from me
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> far more on this side than the other -
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> I am on the left
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> no jokes - I am trying to help you see this
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> something between a narrow triangle and a line
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> had been started, as I say,
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> about two thirds of the way up, on the left-hand side,
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> and directed towards the top right-hand corner -
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> though I doubt that it is square or even rectangular -
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> not making it, a brush full of white birds, dropping most of
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> its pigment on the left-hand side, in the middle of
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> an imagined left-hand column, and lifted, leaving a tapering triangle line
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> that's lost in the wet brown of the right hand of the visible field
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> viscous white specks here and there
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Douglas Barbour
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care to be more
precise about whatever
it is you are
saying, I said
Bill Manhire
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