I see & hear this, David, Especially liked the jar of 'someone shorter
else,' & how the writing/walking must alter....
Get what you say about walking through time(s)....
Doug
On Apr 27, 2014, at 12:30 AM, David Bircumshaw <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> *Crossing the Mud, the Day Finds *
>
> me walking on the line
> of a worn, smothered path
> through a brown muddy,
> mud-muddled, ridge and furrow
> field (‘rig’, I’m told, they say
> ‘rig’ in the county)
>
> trying to follow
> someone shorter
> else’s steps, footsteps,
> the glue pull of slippage
> either side. By *Smeeton*
> (the Smith’s *toun*)
>
> *Westerby* (the West farm).
> Appreciate how hard it is to follow
> in someone else’s steps. The as they say
> to follow. To literally.
> No other gait goes
>
> quite the same,
> on the ancient path. Your stride
> has to bend and buckle, your ham-strings
> strain like balked wood, your eyes
> become transfixed,
> you lose
>
> all sense of track
> and where (
> *in the field, the goo mud field*) of what
> is above, beside, behind you, of where
> you are heading
>
> other than those prints,
> the small moist prints like mist,
> on the human way,
>
> *writhen *
> the ever-writing map,
> across dumped ploughed centuries,
> the snake-track
> before you.
>
> --
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