'Ambulance involved.' Wasit the poetry??)
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From: Poetryetc: poetry and poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]] On
Behalf Of Bill Wootton
Sent: 19 March 2014 10:35
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Subject: Re: What Katy Did next
Thanks, Pat, Andrew, Ken. I felt that too, Ken about the latter lines
getting too leggy and will work on them. Katy I have not clapped eyes on for
twenty years at least. The last time was at a mutual friend's place who was
staging a croquet party on his extensive back lawn. It was a BYO bottle
of spirits. Katy's new boyfriend collapsed over a table of bottles some time
during the night. Ambulance involved.
Bill
> On 19 Mar 2014, at 8:25 am, Kenneth Wolman <[log in to unmask]>
wrote:
>
> I'm concerned only by the shift to long lines after so many
> ballad-like lines before. For the rest, it's lovely. I've had a Katy
> or two in my life, and this makes me reminiscent.
>
> Ken
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