yes
yet the expansion in your comment on the whole situation, Lawrence, is so interesting that I wish more of it could be distributed in your at-present for-me elliptical mini-evocation.
M
On 06/03/2014, at 4:15 AM, Lawrence Upton wrote:
> thank you, Doug
> I am an intuitive fisherman who casts where the knowledgeable fisherman
> kindly point out that I have no chance
> I am often successful, but it upsets me, even though I only fish to eat I
> am much happier when the knowledgeable fishermen give me their cast offs
> I'm glad you think I made a poem out of that angst!
> it makes the seas seem less incarnadine
>
> L
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> On 5 March 2014 16:55, Douglas Barbour <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
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>> A heavy landing, it feels like, Lawrence, & that's meant as praise, so
>> much so quickly..
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>> Doug
>> On Mar 5, 2014, at 4:22 AM, Lawrence Upton <[log in to unmask]>
>> wrote:
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>>> *landed fish*
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>>> hearing
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>>> the only sound
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>>> collapsing
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>>> through several orifices
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>>>
>>> a large slowness
>>>
>>> left unfinished
>>>
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>> Swept snow, Li Po,
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>> to the road that hies to office
>> away from home.
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